Whats in a word?

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First version: Boring. Contains the passive verb ‘are’ and the negative ‘no’. Does not contain imagery.

  • No cars are coming from either direction.

Second version: Imagery.  No passive verbs, no negatives.

  • The drowsy road stretches for empty miles in each direction.

 

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